this was so so good — the entire act of seeing devotion as this pathetic man’s rebuke and comparing that to God’s indifference. it’s so sad you’re surrounded by assholes but on the plus point — so good writing.
wah — and do take into serious consideration that voiceover suggestion.
this was so so good — the entire act of seeing devotion as this pathetic man’s rebuke and comparing that to God’s indifference. it’s so sad you’re surrounded by assholes but on the plus point — so good writing.
wah — and do take into serious consideration that voiceover suggestion.
thank you for being so kind lol
still didn't understand the voiceover thing tho
Like mimic bacchan and sing your poems and add that voiceover
it’s pieces like this that i wish would get more recognition, this is truly so beautiful written i’m in absolute awe🥹
oh what beautiful writing !!!